i watch my action tense and wordiness in sentences when i am writing my technical diddley.
我在写技术文章时注意句子中的动作时态和多余词。
wordiness is a good indicator.
长度是一个很好的暗示。
well, the repeated faulty wording is a wordiness of the sentence structure, which should be deleted.
语病重复是语句结构上的累赘,是应该删除的多余成分。
to achieve conciseness of your letter-writing , try to keep your sentences short , avoid unnecessary wordiness or repetition , and eliminate excessive details .
要达到你信件写作的简洁,就要努力保持句子简短,避免不必要的多嘴和重复,清除多余的细节。
find a balance between wordiness and lack of detail.
「简」和「繁」的平衡
this is a movement that advanced modernism in arts which concentrated on reforming the medium of poetry as opposed to romanticism, especially tennyson's wordiness and high-flown language in poetry.